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Your eyes,
reflect the surface
of my skin,
so vibrantly red and ready
to begin.
Shall we begin?

Your lips,
they part to reveal everything
your tongue it dances
saliva gleams.
They are everything.

It's not just the taste,
it's the way I feel
so soft yet ridges
I reveal.
And still you're letting me
in.

Don't Rush,
I'm not going anywhere.
Your hands cupped,
you hold me in the air.
For a moment a fruit can fly.

My pain,
can be your pleasure
as I slip away.
Nibble by bite,
your hunger obey.
Your pleasure I want
to satisfy.

And you, can have all of me.
And you, can devour me sweetly.
And you, with your teeth can tear me apart.

And you, can have all of me.
And you, can fall asleep with me.
And you, can remember the taste.
Love from a strawberries point of view.. oh yeah the strawberry is doomed. 
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Mez3rika Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014  Hobbyist
Ooooo... So erotic. :eyes: :heart:
I think I'm fully aware at two themes which you write beautifully--heavy emotions, and this. ;p
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HamsterScribbles Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
And I RARELY write this. x)
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Mez3rika Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist
But you're REALLY good at it. ;p
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HamsterScribbles Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
So should I write one for you?
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Mez3rika Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist
...Uuuuuuuuuuhhhhhmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... *blush:
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HamsterScribbles Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
I would...
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Mez3rika Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist
:faint: :blush:
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BloodyBlade123 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hahahaha I didnt even realize it was about a strawberry at first!! :D the title slipped my mind while reading this! I didnt realise it until I read the comments afterwards XD
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SienaStarlyn Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student General Artist
HAHA TAKE THAT STRAWBERRY SHORTCAKE!
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